I am always there to help with your sorrow...
With no one around to show appreciation...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Do you think you'll give me that attention...?
This life of mine was given to me as a borrow...
Cause i only live it as a charade...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Would you still be afraid...?
So many memories to outgrow...
All burning out like an ember...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Will I be the one you remember...?
My life is becoming even more narrow...
Seeing it come closer to it's true end...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Would you still consider me a friend...?
Just this lonely path I follow...
With a feeling that I want to die...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Promise me you won't Ask why...!
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Lines 17-20 are just great. It wraps it all together has a lot of depth to it. I hope you keep writing cuz this is amazingly good.
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Deep! It is amazing how you kept repeating the line "If I am not here tomorrow...", and still being able to rhyme. I try to rhyme, but end up writing a free verse after awhile. Great job! Keep on penning.
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