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Eloquent Tears

When sobs have turned to
whispers, ashes to dust,
my soul bleeds azure ink,
eloquent tears from deepest
concaves of my heart,
consecrated to pages
of my memory, forever lost.

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Prompt: "Eloquent tears".

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  • stompsalot
    February 8, 2008
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    oh this is lovely! Congrats on the Bronze!! very moving write. expressive.
    blessings *stomps


  • penman gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    good stuff!