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A Lock and a Key

You stole my heart,
when I saw your entire world
falling apart.

I held you even closer,
when my sight; my breath; my life
was about to be over.

You are my everything,
locked away for so long
without saying a thing.

I found who I am in the end,
by simply finding you,
my love, my life, my friend

You, my lock, I the key
our souls feel as one
in this lovely eternity.

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  • bleedingheart91
    February 27, 2008
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    Aw...

    Are you in love??? It's so cute, it makes me want to cry! >.< I like it alot!


    • LostInTheDream
      February 27, 2008
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      yeah

      i cant be with her anymore, thats why my romance is "dead" when we were having problems it was "suicidal"...


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 21, 2008

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    wow!

    this was an amazing poem sweetie

    Woot-Woot

    keep up the great work and i hope everything works out ok, mucho love to you

    endless


  • The Kake Show
    February 21, 2008

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    im sorry ok... i was wrong i just didnt want to hurt you... i screwed upp like always .... oim sorry

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