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Autumn

Auburn leaves flutter
Down to dirt and stone-parched ground,
Bare limbs in their wake,
All twirling, dancing away
In solemn fits of the wind.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 21, 2008
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    Excellent

    Most ingenius and well penned poem yet about Fall and how leaves fall and well how branches get weighed down with snow. any ways besides all that this is a very highly detailed well penned poem. any ways love the stunning visualization through out this poem and also enjoyed the portrayings cene unfolding within this poem. kepe up the good work yuo got my clappy


  • De-Throned
    February 10, 2008

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    I really like your take on this it makes it come alive.. I really like the line "Bare Limbs in thier wake" and even though it is just a haiku it is so descriptive good job


  • paullallady silver member
    February 9, 2008

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    what a descriptive piece of writing
    you have penned here. It is wonderful.
    I love the images that you have portrayed.
    great job on this one.