Auburn leaves flutter
Down to dirt and stone-parched ground,
Bare limbs in their wake,
All twirling, dancing away
In solemn fits of the wind.
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Most ingenius and well penned poem yet about Fall and how leaves fall and well how branches get weighed down with snow. any ways besides all that this is a very highly detailed well penned poem. any ways love the stunning visualization through out this poem and also enjoyed the portrayings cene unfolding within this poem. kepe up the good work yuo got my clappy
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I really like your take on this it makes it come alive.. I really like the line "Bare Limbs in thier wake" and even though it is just a haiku it is so descriptive good job
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what a descriptive piece of writing
you have penned here. It is wonderful.
I love the images that you have portrayed.
great job on this one.
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