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Taste of Heartbreak

He smelt of old cologne && nicotine
But he tasted of toothpaste && heartbreak.
Though I was only eighteen
I knew this love was a mistake


Chorus:
Love dosn't come with a happy ending guarantee
And you can't always depend on the ones you love
You may disagree with me
But I'll tell you this
In the end you'll have your taste of heartbreak


Every memory like a poloriad picture stuck in my mind
I'll never forget the last thing he said
"Please don't leave me behind"
I guess things are better left unsaid

Love dosn't come with a happy ending guarantee
And you can't always depend on the ones you love
You may disagree with me
But I'll tell you this
In the end you'll have your taste of heartbreak

I'll never believe the lies
Or every word that came off his lips.
Cause I don't think he realized
That all he did was make my heart skip.(Heart skip)

Love dosn't come with a happy ending guarantee
And you can't always depend on the ones you love
You may disagree with me
But I'll tell you this
In the end you'll have your taste of heartbreak


I can still smell the smoke
From his fingertips on mine
Oh, How my heart broke
When I saw thier hands intertwined.

Maybe one day he'll get the hint
That it was my handwriting in that bathroom stall.
He still thinks it was just a misprint.
But it wasn't at all.



Love dosn't come with a happy ending guarantee
And you can't always depend on the ones you love
You may disagree with me
But I'll tell you this
In the end you'll have your taste of heartbreak






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  • Merciful-Manner
    April 22, 2008
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    good job

    That's very good I like it very much. But yea I know and can relate to this poem very much.


  • krupty
    March 8, 2008

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    this kicked ass. Too bad you had writers block because i liked where this was going. i like line 2 .. tasted like toothpaste and heartbreak... fantastic.. also i like your screen name.. thats why i looked at this lol


    • LoveAndCocaine
      March 10, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment.I appreciate it.yeah took me a while to come up w/ the name. lol. thanks.