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13 Words About You.

Familiar fluttering feeling
Leaves me breathless
I'm in love...
These butterflies don't lie.

Author notes

Written for the one I'm in love with. ^_^

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  • xXbellaswanXx
    February 12, 2008
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    simple and straight to the point.
    yet, its deep and true.

    i love it!


  • Naridill gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Love the end line - its beautiful and such gorgeous phrasing but I feel the lead up is a little lacking.

    Thanks for entering,


  • XxDie In VainxX
    February 7, 2008
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    Coolio,,

    Short But Sweet,,That's A Really Awesome Poem