Please don't waste yourself from my arms
Though I know it's time for you to leave
I cherish this moment and every moment
for my love I never no if it shall be our last.
Knowing there will be no promises made as you
leave, as when you may return to me my love
My heart live's on these moments every breath
we capture from one another while you are here.
Your kiss linger's on my lips, your essence
remains on my pillow, and these moments we have
cry in my soul for more.
Though my love I know you must leave, for this war waits
for no one.
A contest entry
- leaving?... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended February 21, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Isn't it amazing how much one person can come to mean to us.
We don't make any promises but wish sincerely that when they leave they will desire to return to us.
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Sad sentiments expressed so well in these lines - there is always a time to go, and a time to leave, a time to be born and a time to die. As you said, war waits for now one. (Check for I never know if it will be our last). Way to go with the silver. Congratulations!
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wow this is such a beautiful poem!!!
as i read it i could picture every emotion as if they were my own.
i feel as if this was my own story although mine is quiet different at THIS paticular moment.
i love your poem Delane it wonderfully written. -
what a sweet, tender and romantic
piece of poetry. The rythm and
flow were wonderful and I enjoyed
it very much. good luck in the
contest. -
ahhhhhhh very soft and filled with sweet words of love. enjoyable to read and meditate on. success.
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wow my sister this was so very deep and full of love and emotions
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remains on my pillow, and these moments we have
cry in my soul for more.
Though my love I know you must leave, for this war waits
for no one.
Ah I love the close intensity of the moments shown in the words..a wonderful work indeed..well done....
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