Desperate, dirty, despairing
Winds of anguish blow reality
into wounded wings
without a whisper
World rends her soul
talons, tearing and terrible
Sorrow sits on shoulders
that are too heavily burdened
Flagrant youth siphoned off
by clutching carrion
She weeps
In a list
A contest entry
- picture prompt by Lexie -.
525 points, ended February 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - To all those rejected poems!!! Come and Take Refuge!!! by No longer in use.
600 points, ended October 21, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmmm this is hard and deep. It hurt to read. This is very wonderful. Most excellent. Wow. Sad. Good. Great write. Keep it up.
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Wow! Great write! Excellent take on the prompt! You're very talented! Keep up the good work my friend! Keep smiling and holding your head up!
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wow
this is exceptional,
your words are carfull chosen to take the reader exactly where you want them,
beautifully done
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