I search for my future as an answer to my questions, all I see; him.
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i had something really good but i cant remember it b/c i got interrupted. anyway. this will have to do.
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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^_^ I like this
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Its good, i think you could have put it into a better format, and had a little better word choice... I still really like it, for only using 15 words you packed some power into it! -
this is ok it could be better
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wow! wonderful job here, i find it very powerful for such the short amount of words =)
stephanie
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ahh I see.
you saw me enter this contest and you wanted to give it a try.. hrm??
exactly
~teehee~
and I know who the "him" is.. YAY ME!!
good luck in this one though...
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yeah, i was at school and was entering another contest like this one but fewer words and i had an awesome entry but didnt have time to put it in and now its gone and i cant remember what i wrote. anyway...i saw that you entered and decided to try....you're right. lolz
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