Wonderful moments
Laced with venom.
Poison in the end.
Looks like gilded relief
on the outside.
But change happens,
And I'm not ready.
I haven't found my antidote.
A contest entry
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Option six "Laced with venom..." Please give me feedback about how you relate to this one!
Comments
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Great write, I love the prompt you chose. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Cool ! This is simple but so graphic with great use of words.. Love your last line .. antidote..
Thanks for your entry
Julie
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