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Choose--x

You could fuck me into
  The star studded distance
You could bring back the innocent side of me
    I had when I was thirteen

Your lip-locks
  Could send me on top
Of this desolate world
      Where I'm sick of being just "that" girl

Make me believe in [me] again
    That seems like its a fading trend
Make me feel alive, because I felt dead
       
Or y o u
Could;;

Treat me like Ive been treated before
  & bang my head into the head board
Just be someone to open up & explore
    & then ignore

Bruise the very face
  That you once kissed sweetly
I used to love the beatings
    I watched you fall from grace

Help up too high on the pedalstool
  The fall was a long way
d
o
w
n

& I'll never be able to get back up again
    So much for the happy endings
& what you said...\\\\





   

Author notes

this came out with adrenaline and a sudden rush of inspiration

x--xoxo--x

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 23, 2008

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    & I'll never be able to get back up again
    So much for the happy endings
    & what you said...\\\\

    i like this ending a lot. xD to be honest the whole poem has a really good flow of emotion that just keeps pouring. great write.
    laura.


  • dabpunx
    November 11, 2008

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    i can sense the adrenaline and the rush and yet this poem is expressed in almost a detached way. lets hope for the top part. i wish you dont have to be with people like that second part anymore.

    "Help up too high on the pedalstool"
    i think you meant "hel(d) up too high on the (pedestal)"

    great work. you are a good writer that's why you're on my favorites.


  • TeenFailure
    October 10, 2008

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    You are a very deep writter, full of passion and greatness. I feel like im that girl when i read your poem. I like the way you write.


  • Necromantic Snow
    February 15, 2008

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    I love this! This is such a powerful poem and I think most people can relate to it-- I know I can! As always, this poem is excellent (like your other poems)! Keep up the great work!


  • Bruised.Roses
    February 10, 2008

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    wow hun this is powerful, I know how this feels to love someone so much and have them use you then throw you away. Just know love does exists so don't give up there is someone out there who will treat you the way you deserve. amazing job keep writting.
    xox Tash


  • Broken Machine
    February 7, 2008

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    Wow that's amazing! Keep up the great work. But I would change bored to board!

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