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Shape # 1

                            Circles
                          What are they
                      A very special shape
                    The shape of coco cookies
                  The shape of mysterious eyes
                    They also can be bubbles
                      Or even some flowers
                            And the round cherry                               
                          I love them
                            Circles











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  • SpiritMother
    February 17, 2008

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    Very good

    For freestyle verse, this is very good..although the text did get a little out of line. Blame it on the puter! LOL And thanks for the comments on my contest!

  • Kyo-N
    February 9, 2008
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    You should try fixing some spaces there. "And the round cherry" <- That line is outspaced. I guess I'm not the only one who has problems with the text editor.