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Scrawlings

There is nothing more to say.
I have been silenced
and I cannot speak
through the needle hole
that tries to inhale, exhale, inhale…

The worst
is never the worst.
Silence is always the loudest.
Unguarded doors are the hardest to escape.

Life was never meant to be easy.

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  • logorrhoea
    September 30, 2008

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    your writes are always hard to read.
    the pain tends to tear the cold air in my throat..

    bruise the hollows
    of my bloody abdomen
    my sultry mouth

    but deep and beautiful, they are.
    hugs


  • frownsnfreckles
    June 15, 2008

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    'Silence is always the loudest.'

    yes, it can be when we feel alone and vulnerable but it is in the silence we find our own voice & strength beyond the fear.

  • Last Resort Reached
    February 10, 2008

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    You are amazing, you know that?

    I hate the fact that I never know what to say on these!

    Let the applause serve as my comment.


  • Twinstar
    February 7, 2008

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    Hoodwink!

    Excellent piece! Very deep and hold so much truth! really love this!

    Love & light
    Debbera


  • Endeavor gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Hood Wink

    The worst
    Is never the worst.
    Silence is always the loudest.
    Unguarded doors are the hardest to escape.

    Life was never meant to be easy.

    Much said in very few words
    Thank you for your help with the Bandits

    Rick


  • freespirit51
    February 7, 2008

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    HOOD WINKED

    Beautiful and very deep poem my poetic friend. I know some of what you speak and it seems the harder I try the further behind I get.

    You've been hood winked because we care.


  • StarEyes
    February 7, 2008

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    Sunny Chelli,

    Do you realize how deep this one is? What a read!! I love it though! You really make one stop and think, alot sometimes!

    No contest? why?

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Mom

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