i wanna rip the flesh from you bones
take you apart with my bare hands and see what makes you work
pick your brain with chop sitcks and laugh at you
but why do you squirm that way?
i dont care....you hurt me...you tore my heart out so now it's time for you to hurt...
to put you under me the way i was under you for so long...
ha cant move can you? nope, i took your arms off, and your legs too
their in the corner rotting so that you'll never be able to touch her again...
and you'll never be able to run either
cant speak can you?
that cuz i sewed your lips together so that you couldnt lie to me any more
your eyes...cant see can you?
that's cuz you have none...you always wanted to keep an eye on me so i made them in a pendant that i wear always
you heart is no longer in your chest either...its in a place where no one but me will find it!
you're dead, and i'm the cause...i'm dead too and you're the cause...isnt love grand??
A contest entry
- Abuse, Death, Pain by psychomonkey.
550 points, ended March 10, 144 entries
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well my dear friend im sorry to see the pain that you have gone through but at the same time its to see because this is a great piece of work keep on keeping on eacj day we become stronger and more and more envisioned
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"Isn't love grand??"
Great ending to this angry piece! -
So full of raw emotion and anger. Very well written. I too have imagined and felt this way about a certain person that had ruined my life. You did a great job and oddly i loved reading about you wanting to torture and kill someone. Thank you for entering
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There are some spelling errors in this that kind of irked me because it's really a powerful piece and very effective. The imagery is excellent, I could close my eyes and see the scene in my mind.
Welcome to the site, enjoy
Faerie
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Oh my. This is very dark and so so full of anger. It sounds like you had many good reasons for writing this and feeling this way. This sounds very much like a relationship of abuse.
This is what AP is often about, people writing their feelings, which is just one way of letting out our emotions.
Thanks so much for sharing.
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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wow you and me both
y love this one show how you rerlly fell then that crap happens and so beautily done my pleasr to read
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