love me i would love you more
kiss me i would long for more
touch me i would burn of fire
in thoughts of you, my desire
tell me
forever
i would tell you my love, more
i would hold you within , more
kingdom of love , i would make
i would scream your name' sake
instead of
God above
be my Valentine,be my tommorow
after 14th, fear not to follow
me to a magic world of flowers
to refresh ouselves in showers
of love
my love
A contest entry
- Bring Your Greatest Valentine Poems by rosepoet.
415 points, ended February 24, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the best poem i like
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Beautiful
i would scream your name' sake
instead of
God above
what a beautiful piece
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woww this is the sweetest valentine poem so lovely im sure beloved guy will just love it as much as he loves you
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This is an amazing poem. I realy enjoying reading especially the first half of it. I personally like a poem .... when some one reads it though... they must feel the poem and be able to dedicate the poem to anyone. But this one you wrote seems to be for you alone because you put the person name below.
I wanted to give this a winning but I don't know. So much beautiful poem here.
Well goodluck in the contest. -
Beautiful
Hello,
i have just finished reading your poem and wish to let you know just how much i enjoyed the read.Your poem is filled with love and devotion for your man.You painted a very beautiful picture of love in the mind of the reader.The write was also easy to understand.Best of wishes in the contest.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Angel.
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