Many love your green eyes and sweet smell
and you make everybody feel well.
Some are chronically addicted to you.
You make them hungry like Scooby-Doo.
The 20th of April is your birthday,
the day that all stoners walk the high way.
You make everybody's world twirl.
Mary Jane, you're a naughty girl.
You love that Yellow Submarine song
and laugh so hard when you see Cheech & Chong
while you're in some joint, hitting bongs.
You also hear things like gobbling gongs.
But sometimes you can be quite blunt.
You commented rudely about a girl's front
You told her she was like a two by four.
The Reefer has made you trippin' once more.
It seems that this Edge I got,
abstains me from smoking pot.
I won't take the sinner's shot.
Sorry MJ, you're not hot.
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don't know what to say... I like it but other than that I'm speechless. thank you for entering
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Fantastic
This is some funny shit. I like the two-by-four part...I thought that was really funny. Well I guess what I am trying to say is....nice write! -
'you make them hungry like scooby-doo', that's hilarious. Nicely written. Best wishes and thank you for entering my contest.
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This is awesome!!! When I first read the title I absolutely didnt think of pot at all, but you did sooo well with this.
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Oh good i am so glad to hear that you dont take that dare. Drugs are not good for anyone and sometimes they take away your life from others around you. And thats just wrong. I am glad to see that you care and chose not to take that route. this is heart warming. Thank you and best of luck!! :] -
i like it
the innuendo about blunt was superb....lol
awesome job with this.....for the record, i don't really get high...lol
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good poem ..love it
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colt 45 and two zigzags, baby, that's all we need...
haha awesome job, so different!! love it--very memorable. love the green eyes especially. -
very different good job
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This acutally a pretty good rhyme/rap of the highs and lows of MJ.
I love how you described it like a person and I love the ending...you made it desireable but switch it up at the end.
great job
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lol...i love this poem...
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Thank you for your poem in the final of our series of contests, it made for an interesting read.
Please keep your eyes open for further contests from us, we look forward to reading more work from you.
All the best
Sue and Jeff
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lol i love this poem i love the way u put it
it rox =]
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