People are a good excuse
For all the pain and my abuse
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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short and simple
This is quite powerful for only two lines. But it is just that, an excuse. I've lived through ever abuse there is and not until I forgave the abusers did my life feel like living again. Nice job!
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Hmmm...
I like how you managed to use less than 15 words and still make a rhyming poem with power! Its great! -
it rhymees ;/
more powerful if not rhymeing and with better word choice -
maybe because htey are, lol.
great poem =)
good luck in the contest =)
stephanie
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