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the heaven

The flowers sing their children into the wind,
a chorus producing life. Forever smiling for the sun.

They line the houses, the picket fences,
guardians against the coming fall.

Gardens crescendo in vibrant color.
Dandelions giggle, bright staccato plumes...
lilies tantalize, folding their legs in grace and piety.

And we gaze at this heaven, our own eyes mortal fleshy blooms. 

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peace to all ~flight

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  • jeluetmer
    February 11, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery, even though it was -10 today I see some hope for spring.


    • flight
      February 11, 2008
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      I'm just waiting for spring! I'm sick of this winter...and my runny nose and my cough, ick! peace to all ~your jo


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 10, 2008

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    Wonderful, stunning, unbelievable! LOVE IT. It's full of imagery and that's what I reallyyy love.
    Keep writing


    • flight
      February 10, 2008
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      Thank you...and by the way I love you picture...
      One Tree Hill? peace to all ~flight


  • acoustical
    February 7, 2008

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    "Gardens crescendo in vibrant color.
    Dandelions giggle, bright staccato plumes...
    lilies tantalize, folding their legs in grace and piety."
    yayyy

  • Kim6
    February 7, 2008
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    Nice


  • Ryno gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    13 – Flower

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