I know I stare at you, I'm sure you can tell,
But I see you glare back quite often as well.
You laugh every time I tell a joke in class,
I don't even mind that you laugh like an ass.
I'm sure that you like me, just go the extra mile.
We have the same friends,same class, even same style.
Oh god, you're coming up to my spot under the tree,
but then I die as I see you flirt with the girl
that sat right behind me.
A contest entry
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Comments
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oh honey! that was sad! i really liked it though! good job! thank you for entering and good luck!
NineTailedFox -
very normal. this happens a lot. every girl has had this happened. it is nicely writen but you forgot to put the saying I requested somewhere on this page. please do that to qualify. thank you.
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This reminds me of silly games, the song that two people feel the same way but they never had the courage to tell eachother, so they ended up losing out on there love. Nicely done.
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lol, I couldn't help but imaging farting sounds when I came to 'laugh like an ass'
Anyway, this is good, though it has quite a sad ending
Rather a shock value in fact 
Thank you for entering this as well!
Leander -
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Awwwww.
That's a sad ending... You started off with such deep emotions that were felt to be true... and then it is ruined when the girl next to you receives the attention you wanted all along.... This is bitterly sweet... and it really touches me.
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Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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This is cute and I like the simpleness and I really like the little twist at the end. Thank you for this entry and good luck in my contest.
~Maria -
nice write. I think everyone has been in that situation at least once. good, emotional write
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Cute, yes ...
but probably not cute enough to win this contest, unless I get very few entries. In line 7 you said "Your" when you meant "you're". That's a real no no here. Fix it asap. The rules say correct punctuation so it has to be fixed or you're out of here.
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I like this, its cute.
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ha
completely sums my life -
Believe in yourself you are awesome
You are the best, you have to know that. If you want something bad enough all you have to do is know this about yourself.He is probably flirting to get your attention. You have a nice talent. How long have you been writing poetry? Your poem seems very realistic.
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