Bliss...
Hold me close.
Forgive my evil pleasures.
I love you most.
Ash...
Author notes
Just a quick one to explain......Ash has been searching for Bliss (his lost Love) for many years, being a Vampire he has continued to physically love and spiritually wain throughout his years.
Did I say quick ooppppsss sorry.
A contest entry
- Got 13 words? by Naridill.
380 points, ended February 9, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any comment welcome
Comments
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I feel the authors notes settle some confusion but on its own, its left a little in wind. But still is a beautiful entry.
Thanks for entering,
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woah it's amazing...and quite scary too.
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wow these aresome powerful words bro which portray deep meaning within them.well done and best of luck
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