Only time will tell
which way my heart will choose to go
Will I choose the man I love
Or the friend I fell in love with
Who will I marry in the end
And who will cry
Will I truly be happy?
Only time will tell
Author notes
LuvMySoul (sorry it wasn't here before... the bell rang before I could)
A contest entry
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Comments
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Since you are only nineteen I hope you will wait to make this momentous decision. I believe you should marry not when you can't wait to live with him, but rather when you can't imagine living without him. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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This is really good!
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I think you contridict yourself here. You ask if you will choose the man you love or the friend you fell in love wit... that would mean you love them both no?
I dont think time is a factor, choice is what will tell the truth. When you take control of your life... you will find that you gain so much more happiness than when you let time decide for you.
Good luck poet.
Criss -
Time passes much too quickly and we don't want to lose happiness that we know we already have. Life is filled with questions and though we may not find all the answers in a lifetime the heart helps to answer the most important ones. This was an effective use of the title and leaves your reader wondering. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest. I must ask you to put your screen name in the author notes as it was a requirement.
Joyce 
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