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[ Sun falls from the stars, ]

Sun falls from the stars,
Rain dances,
Thats when I love you more.

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Not sure why the title is the same line as poem? But apart from that, I do love the title, it's bold and fluent phrasing.

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