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Should've kept Quiet

My Eyes Grow wide
My fists Curl Up
These rules I will not abide
This anger begins to start-up
Since I'm A Danger To Myself
Just Think What I Can Do To You
Soon Your Head Will Be On My Shelf
Please Bid Your Life Adieu
For Tonight The Blaze Will Rise
And It Will Burn
You Should've Taken My Advice
Now You Have Everyones Concern
I Told You Not To Talk About Me
But You Kept Up Your Crap
Don't Get Me Wrong It Was Gutsy
But Now Its you I'll Entrap

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Brandan Grier Uncle

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  • Three Doves
    February 15, 2008

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    Great Expression

    such a great delivery of I'm going to get you. Almost makes me want to stay out of your way. Continue my nephew to spill your heart on parchment. Please if you would place your username in response to my comment thank you


  • new light
    February 11, 2008

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    "Since I'm A Danger To Myself
    Just Think What I Can Do To You"

    ^^Otep lyrics?.
    hehe

    i love those lines.


    great write


  • l o v e b u r s t
    February 8, 2008
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    very good..lots of anger..u mad at ne1?


  • Sf
    February 8, 2008
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    Oh WOW!... I was about to pick out my favourite thing but I fallen in love with all of it...


  • JustFallingApart
    February 7, 2008
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    dare i ask,who is this about?

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