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Blinded

Life is too short for
Blind Hatred
Even if you are an
Immortal

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    February 9, 2008

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    Short, simple and straight to the point. The direction is something new, very well used here and delicate but pounding nicely.

    Thanks for entering,

  • Judith Chandler
    February 8, 2008

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    Paradoxical. No, maybe not. It makes a lot of sense and it's a great write. Pithy and true.
    Succinct and well expressed.