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Solitude

Solitude brings several objects:
Audible thoughts,
Wandering hearts,
Penetrating silence
and
Endless answers.

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A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    February 9, 2008

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    Listy through out but I can read the imagery with fluent spacings. Love the phrasing in some parts - very nifty.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 8, 2008

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    you know you got that right in more ways then one my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, but i think you got it

  • Judith Chandler
    February 7, 2008

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    How true. I like the way you have expressed this. Great word choice and the audible thoughts and endless answers of solitude though you have boiled it down quite skillfully.