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Sing Song Gone

 

 

 

 

 

She sang beautifully
Until her melody
Departed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Ravensdark
    February 8, 2008

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    I was expecting something lyrical and rhyming when I saw the title. Then behold a short sad little piece of prose. Quite poigant. Nicely done.


  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008
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    Nice

    Its good thanx for entering!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    these are beautiful words and they hold such a soothing and gentle effect within them.well done auntie