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scArED

I'm scared
You went off to war
Will I ever see you again?

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Simple and seems personal - perhaps too questioning and not enough poetics devices or even arrangement. But I can feel the longing through this piece.

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  • sunny day
    February 7, 2008

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    anna, My nephew is in the marines and was going to be shipped overseas in April. He just broke his leg and we don't know what will happen now. We were all scared here and the only thing we can do is keep the faith that He will be safe. If this is the picture you mentioned you will be fine with it. Thank you for sharing with all of us and keep that ink flowing. Love and God bless, Joyce