Songbirds whistle their hymns in tune
Though many hardships are at hand
Perfect imperfection’s, poems swoon
This sister helps, her fellow man
In troubled times, her hearts my room
I thank you once again true friend
For smiles you shine upon souls
Your golden heart with prayers you send
Mend broken shells together whole
Like an angel, burdens she’ll tend
Keep whistling your tender tunes
For all who hear will be at peace
From early morn,, till shining moon
Your soul sprinkles, healings release
In troubled times, her hearts my room
Author notes
Thanks for being such a wonderful sis to me sweetie.
In a list
A contest entry
- Dedications To Beauty by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended February 18, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thanks for the comment....i love this poem..its beautiful...it seems to me that there is a softy inside!
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Thank you for commenting on my poems i appreciate it been a while since ive gotten comment....very sweet poem she sounds like a very very sweet person
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This also reads like a song as it reads so smooth I lvoe it and think you done awsome as a dedication to beauty congrats on your trophy I would of given it gold.
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Congrates On The Bronze Dad!
Love the poetry you weave so beautifully!
-Tim Jr.
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Beautiful Dedication
Yes my brother and friend your kind heart speaks well of our sister and congrats on the award. peace in the glory.
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"From early morn, till shining moon" Such beautiful imagery here and throughout your whole piece. Simply lovely write. A wonderful tribure to a friend, sure to be treasured always. Congratulations on your trophy.
Kelli
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What a beautiful and loving dedication to someone who touches so many hearts each day...she is alwys there without stretch arms of love for all...you have sent her a beautiful message of who she is for so many.
Beautifully written, my dear friend.
Love you both,
mystic
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great write dad sure she loved this
good to have people there for you thats the truth kinda like i have you, great work,love bunches
endless -
beautiful for her
Thank you brother for writing
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my dear bro you have brought me to tears with this one as your incredible dedications speak loudly from your inspiring heart and soul. love ya bunches and more. Dear Wendy is a wonderful lady inside and out. many blessings always xxxxxxxxxxxx
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Awww a beautiful and lovely dedication! Great write as always
Take care and God Bless...
~Kate
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This is such a lovely dedication for I'm sure a very sweet person.. Your words are full of emotions and colors.. I loved it Tim! keep writing
Love, ~Lonely
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This poem makes me smile all the way through it. What a beautifully written dedication.
Love,
Amera♥
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"Your golden heart with prayers you send
Mend broken shells together whole"..beautiful..
wow - this is a really beautiful dedication poem....I have noticed that you are so good at these
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AW the song bird sings his tune really well, beauty with no comparrison, she will love this, looks like a winner...
moons
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oh this is such a beautiful piece your words hold so much within them and i can see that she loved it. you have a heart of gold.
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Oh Timothy!!!! Thank you my dear! This means more than words can even say... You just MADE my day, week, month... All of it. This is beautifully penned! I love you bro!!! IF YOU EVER NEED ME, I am here!~~
Thank you....
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