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Rainbow Valley

The girl walked along the valley,
After the storm the previous night,
The valley was awash with clear blue skies,
And a glorious rainbow,
She was surrounded with
A variety of flowers,
The big, towering tree,
As she walked among the flowers
And green, green grass,
She saw a butterfly,
As mesmerising as can be.

Fluttering by,

Peacefully. 

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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 22, 2008
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    thank you very much!


  • jasminerose
    February 10, 2008

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    A very beautiful poem! Such a sense of tranquility in your splendid imagery! Wonderfully written and thank you so much for entering!!
    Jasminerose


  • Xx Luna xX
    February 8, 2008

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    wow!

    This is beautiful! I felt every word, VERY WELL DONE!
    She saw a butterfly,
    As mesmerising as can be.

    Fluttering by,

    Peacefully.
    Beautiful!


  • Ja Vorbesc
    February 8, 2008

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    Sweet. Simple wordings are a refreshing change from so many fancy and 'sophisticated' manners. Green, green grass is nice. I like repetition.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    awwww this is such a beautiful write and i love the imagery within your words well done and best of luck sweetie

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