All by myself I'm fine you see
All I need is pen paper mixed with simple reality
My imagination will surely grow
As the words from pencil onto paper begin to flow
From my heart my feelings are able to show
Its easier for me this way
Sometimes I don't know what to do or say
An escape I can take almost any-day
If I'm sad
If I cant contain the joy inside
Whatever my thoughts may be
Written on a piece of paper I hope it might bless somebody
As wonders twirl within my mind
Creative words I soon can find
Expressing thoughts through many special words
What life does mean to me
What brings me through soon you will be able to see
A contest entry
- TROPHIES: Less than 5 Gold (Learners INC group only) by The Inc.
300 points, ended February 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i dont think i could have wrote this any better - i really enjoyed this read -


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Good work here
Yes indeed we often give our minds the means to flush out the bad and take in the new through poems and stories .And in the process find the person we so love within . -
So true
For the poet angels take our hands and guide them to a more loving land to share with others and at times brings a tear for our friendship on AP are oh so dear
love Patty

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Aww that was so sweet touched my heart thanks Patty!
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Yeah,
writing is such a release,
such an escape,
such a great blessing,
and very healing too.
I like this.
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This is very sweet! Such a true message. The rhyme made it all flow very nicely. A nice and enjoyable read!
Keep that pen moving!
~ Bright Smyles
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i like your rhyme scheme in this poem. well penned.

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this is excellent!!!
it flows really nicely!!
i really enjoyed reading it
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Awwwwww, this is really sweet.
I love it! It's simplistic yet refined
in its own way. It has a sort of precious
innocence about it that I find
rather appealing. Thank you dear, for
this grand entry.
~The INC."
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