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An escape

All by myself I'm fine you see
All I need is pen paper mixed with simple reality

My imagination will surely grow
As the words from pencil onto paper begin to flow
From my heart my feelings are able to show

Its easier for me this way
Sometimes I don't know what to do or say
An escape I can take almost any-day

If I'm sad
If I cant contain the joy inside
Whatever my thoughts may be
Written on a piece of paper I hope it might bless somebody

As wonders twirl within my mind
Creative words I soon can find

Expressing thoughts through many special words
What life does mean to me
What brings me through soon you will be able to see

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  • candyhamilton
    June 28, 2008
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    i dont think i could have wrote this any better - i really enjoyed this read -


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Good work here

    Yes indeed we often give our minds the means to flush out the bad and take in the new through poems and stories .And in the process find the person we so love within .


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 21, 2008
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    So true

    For the poet angels take our hands and guide them to a more loving land to share with others and at times brings a tear for our friendship on AP are oh so dear
    love Patty


  • warrior-eagle
    May 24, 2008

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    Yeah,
    writing is such a release,
    such an escape,
    such a great blessing,
    and very healing too.
    I like this.

    ..Simply Me♥


  • brightsmylesxx
    May 23, 2008

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    This is very sweet! Such a true message. The rhyme made it all flow very nicely. A nice and enjoyable read!

    Keep that pen moving!
    ~ Bright Smyles


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    i like your rhyme scheme in this poem. well penned.


  • Candy Morphine
    May 21, 2008

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    this is excellent!!!
    it flows really nicely!!
    i really enjoyed reading it

  • The Inc
    February 9, 2008

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    Awwwwww, this is really sweet.
    I love it! It's simplistic yet refined
    in its own way. It has a sort of precious
    innocence about it that I find
    rather appealing. Thank you dear, for
    this grand entry.

    ~The INC."

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