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Expectations

My thoughts of interself control
  have diminished ever
so long ago
All i have left is only the sorrow
thats still left behind
and the feeling of
failure as time slips my mind
If i could only start over in
someone else control
Then maybe i could become
a person to behold



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  • Majija
    March 7

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    Nice piece. we do all at some point regret someting and want to do different if only we could.
    Tanks for entry