green nailed varnish
scratches its surface
deeply soulfully eaten away
eyes fixed in mascara
staring
read me if you care
if you dare
spit venom in my face
scar by tattoo
watch-in butterfly's grabbed wings
torn and tattered
naked trust tethered warn
hair rustled nest buried
for now his love has gone
Author notes
Option 9- Read my mind if you dare
jeese ope this is ok
A contest entry
- Pif and Inspire :- Many Options by Reptile Lady.
825 points, ended February 9, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Evil Eyes
A wicked picture painted here my friend. Soinds like some I once new. lol Good luck in the contest
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Nice writing abe.... beware the women scorned aye haha ....nice imagery to this mate......peace
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Great take from the prompt you painted this so well in your words
Thanks for your entry
Julie
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