a gentle caress with warm lips
inhaling your scent
strong arms, rough hands
your gentle fingertips
tracing lazy circles all over my back
lying close, entwined, skin against skin
holding on fiercely with all of my might
looking deep into your eyes, lost for tonight
alone in the universe, beneath the star filled sky
bodies united, just you and I
co-owner of my mind, heart and soul
never wanting to let you go
whispers of love, fidelity and devotion
there is such beauty in this,
your emotion
eyelids closed
deeply breathing
keeping you near
awake with a start
my eye sheds a tear
in my dreams every night
once again you appear
haunting my thoughts for eternity
our souls intertwined
for love has a way of transcending all time
A contest entry
- the moments.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended February 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dream Walking, Pillow Talking by PureCountry.
875 points, ended March 1, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes, Love Does
have a way of transcending time. For when it is genuine in nature, there is not a force any stronger.
The dream world is a powerful place in which we can be spoken to, and be heard in return. Thank you for sharing your offering, inspired by the given prompt.
Good Luck in the contest.
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Such a sensory filled poem so perfect for this contest! How utterly beautifully you have described those vivid dreams only to awake to with a tear of sadness to know it was a dream.
A pleasure to read this remarkable and so well composed poem!
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haunting my thoughts for eternity
our souls intertwined
for love has a way of transcending all time
This is quite a warm piece..I love the essence of it ..thanks for the wonderful piece... -
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Thank you for your kind comment.
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