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The carpenter (adult content)

Deranged, me(n)talist carpenter-
hard as fucking
nails.

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  • sheltered
    February 10, 2008
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    Appropriately harsh.


  • Lady Eventide
    February 7, 2008

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    Mmmm... wow. I was wondering what you could do with this. I see now. Wow.

    Nice seven word choice. I thought this piece was really quiet creative, especially the first line. Excellent job.