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~A long title for a short poem about life~



Birth to death;
nothing between but
existence.

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  • vici377
    February 7, 2008

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    blunt

    blatantly beautiful..and sadly this is how most people live..they exist..simply exist..when living is so much more fulfilling..every second..on the edge..or as they say..you are taking up space..lol..great write my friend..thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest..hugs a bunch..


  • daviscth silver member
    February 7, 2008
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    This is a wonderful seven words dear and so very true. Kudos to you Fug!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    wow this is awsome and i love your 7 words that contain alot in the them even for short amounts best of luck

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    A concise, compact statement with impact.Kudos.


  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008

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    Great

    I feel like this came right out of my head... You are amazing, this poem is awesome! Best of luck! Thank you for entering!

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