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Breaths Forgotten

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Heart beating; cheeks
red; breaths forgotten;
love.

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A contest entry

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  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008

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    Pretty

    I like this piece, you had a very creative way of saying seven words, and showing so much emotion... Thank you for entering and good luck!!!