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Queen snowdrop the fairy

Floating down on icicles

they hardly make a sound.

The winter fairys were so quiet

as they drifted to the ground.

Twirling in the night sky

the icicles sparkled and glowed.

Lighting the way for fairies

showing them where to go.

As silent as the icicles

queen snow drop came in sight.

She appeared before the fairies

in a flash of pure white light.

Its time for your sleep now

queen snowdrop softly said.

And as  the snowflakes fell

the fairies went to bed.

Drifting of to sleep

the fairies said goodnight.

They hoped that in the morning

more snow would be in sight.

Author notes

OPTION 3 - write me a fantasy poem. dragons, wizards, faeries vampires, etc. that kind of thing! something wit mythical creatures


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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    winter brings

    true imingery to our seasons, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda


  • Cat10
    May 20, 2008

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    thank you for entering! this is a very nice poem! very creative! you did a great job and good luck in the contest!


  • bananasfoster42
    May 3, 2008
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    nice poem! it has great flow to it, and nice imagery. thanks for the entry!


  • daviscth silver member
    March 4, 2008
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    I thought this a beautiful piece.


  • Amanda K. Martin
    February 16, 2008

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    I liked this poem... I like how your words flow and how it paints a vivid picture in my mind when I read it. You done a really really good job with this. I ejoyed this poem a whole bunch!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 9, 2008
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    Congratulations

    I am so pleased to award you with this bronze trophy
    You created such beauty within this write.
    Her thoughts certainly echoed..
    Julie

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    A most stunning poem
    I loved your words through out, you brought the prompt to such a beautiful light.
    Each stanza was breath taking
    Thank you for your entry
    Julie


  • PureRomance
    February 7, 2008

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    This poem is awesome. The imagery is immaculate. You did a fabulous job with this amazing poem. God bless you always and best wishes to you and your poem in the contest. I hope you win.


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    February 7, 2008

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    I like this. Its very good. Good luck in your contest. I think your poem is good. Maybe work on the flow a little better
    Dani

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