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Ballroom Dancing

Ballroom dancing enhanced
my lagging romance
Immensely

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A contest entry

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  • azure85 gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    LOL I bet you waltz divinely, like your poetry gliding along the lines. Good luck to you in the contest!


  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008
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    Great!

    Its good now!

  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008

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    ummm.... seven not six

    you only have six words here, it should be seven. Fix it [ one more word in middle] or i may DQ it. Otherwise, it is a great write! I do like it...