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Reading You

I have a library deep in my mind,
memories cataloged wait on the shelf.
With a special volume, one of a kind;
the pages embossed with parts of myself.

Selecting that volume, I turn the page
and there is the chapter written of you.
I do not see pain; I do not read rage,
I only see love that is found in so few.

The editor knew the book was not finished,
he knew, a new chapter would soon come to be.
He left me your soul not to be diminished,
for he knew that you would come back to me.

You are my friend and I’ll always be here,
as we start a new chapter of love sincere.

 

 

 

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Prompt: "...the moments I am truly alive I spend in you...the moments I am truly aware I live with you...the moments I never want to end...are moments with you" ...Unknown


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  • lake of dremas
    February 10, 2008
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    very classy.. very sensitivce.. very romantic.. bravo!


  • JohnnyD gold member
    February 10, 2008

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    Sweetly done with class,
    for a lovely english lass.

    It's the friends who's binding never breaks regardless of how they are handled that make the best of friends...Lexie is such a gal.



    dad


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    February 8, 2008

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    WONDERFULLY SWEET

    Such a beautiful and warm welcome for a friend...she must love it as i love you for being just you


  • Desire gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Precious!!

    Beautiful piece You have penned to Welcome a Precious Spirit back to AP~~
    Wonderful weaving of words~~
    and in a Sonnet
    Wooooooooo Hooooooooo
    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 8, 2008

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    You are my friend and I’ll always be here,
    as we start a new chapter of love sincere.



    Ah..your immages are quite new and innovative making your poetry very strongs..thanks for the wonderful work....


  • second-born
    February 8, 2008

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    "I do not see pain; I do not read rage,
    I only see love that is found in so few." This is so touching...as you dedicate this sonnet as a welcome treat to your friend...I loved the metaphor and the imagery of your poem...well-done dear poet!

  • Papagallo
    February 8, 2008
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    Most Beautiful

    The words here are beautuful and soft. I live the way you ended the poem in thelast stanza.


  • capricornpoet
    February 7, 2008

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    love is so near this

    A sonnet that breathes of breezes and whispers of love
    its flair...so gentle with care..i loved this...inspiring..reminds me of the honesty of
    Mark Twain ..funny I should think of him..the white clad man who loved life...


  • HaleyMary
    February 7, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. I liked the third stanza the best. It makes me think of how life sometimes works out in ways we can't predict, but sometimes moments happen and opportunities come along that may just be meant to be. This was a wonderful write for Lexie. I hope she likes it. Good luck in the contest.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Hey what the .....I beat allan and jeff here.
    Must of took a break.

    This was as usual Amera, a wonderful piece.
    Pen on my dear.

    Mistress Passions


  • Whoochi gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Beautiful deep dedication to Lexie....love her too..but I am your DOLLFACE! once again, you stun me with the form and how smoothe it floes..love you !


  • Pisces Pieces
    February 7, 2008

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    Such a cherished recognition and appreciation expressed for a love that is obviously so true and deep...

    I love the way you acknowledge that the story has yet to continue, and the importance of the friendship within the bond of love...

    A truly beautiful write!


  • PerVirtuous
    February 7, 2008

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    Reading you is fun for all of us! This speaks of your heart with the beauty I know it contains. This is fantastic. I am so pleased that you have such feelings, and even more pleased that you can share them with us so beautifully. Three bunnies!


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 7, 2008

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    Excellent write by someone who knows their poetry...I am in awe of this, this is class A poetry.
    xxx


  • Faeryn
    February 7, 2008
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    No words to describe how beautiful this is.
    I love it!
    Much love,
    -Tay

  • Flamecaster
    February 7, 2008
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    OMG...wonderful....good luck....


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    February 7, 2008

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    oh princess this is soooo sweet and adorable Lexie will love it for sure


  • Lexie - gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    WOW

    i dont know what to say
    i'm very touched by such kind words
    what a beautifully written piece,
    thankyou!
    its great to be back.
    oh and .... good luck in the contest hehe


  • StarEyes
    February 7, 2008

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    OMG!!!!!!! What a great job you did on this one!! Wow!! This sounds like it is very personal, and well says a lot to me!! I love your sonnets, and this one speaks loud and clear! VERY loud and clear to me!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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