Walking along
I realize that I'm alone again
My man is out at war
And I'm lost
So lost
But maybe time will come
And I won't be alone anymore
Or maybe he will be dead...
Author notes
so sad
A contest entry
- round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
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your man will survive any battle for he has love to keep him strong and that is a big motivator to try to come back in one piece. i know for i have been in those shoes and had the same motivation keeping me sane, DARK.
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eek
I hope he's ok x -
Oh I'm sorry. I love your poem it reminds me of my poem called "War" check it out if you can. Thanks.
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