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Lucky seven

the dice dance
mind, their own
snake-eyes!

A contest entry

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  • onesugar gold member
    February 16, 2008
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    That gamble payed of with those seven words
    you got an HM. Well done

    ~sugar~


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    sounds like a gamble to me
    your words speak of snake eyes
    but they are sometimes lucky
    if you wanted to lose


  • artis
    February 7, 2008
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    being a gambler I love the casual toss of your words,

    and it looks like you got sevens, your in the finalist prelims...good luck on the gold.


    • Dark Otter
      February 8, 2008
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      Thank you

      for brightening my day. Its those comments that keep you writing. I smiled. I'm a former backgammon hustler and craps player


  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008
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    hey

    You could edit it to show more emotion and/or impact, i like the title "Lucky Seven", and it plays well in this contest. Good luck!

  • LostInTheDream
    February 7, 2008
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    Cute

    I like it, its a little plain, considering I am trying to see if you can use seven words in this form to create emotion and impact. Its a nice write though...

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