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This is What I Love

Dreary drab uneventful
As I lie about
Think only of you
Imagining us together
Laying together
Resting as I imagine our souls
Entwining, mingling and mixing as one
This is what I love most
Spending time inside of you

Nothing makes sense
Just a blur going by
As I lie here
In you come
Stay by my side
And everything stops
The birds are humming
The wind blowing gently
This is what I love most
Living with only you

Overwhelming feelings
I want everything to end
Just please stop
Until you come in
And for some reason
Everything is fine
As I look in you eyes
I see the love
And this
This is what I truly love most
The moment I spend with you

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 8, 2008

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    This is what I truly love most
    The moment I spend with you

    The beauty of the poetry here is filled with the intimacy of the love and life as well.well done..and thanks for the wonderful entry....


  • Izu
    February 7, 2008
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    ...i dont know why but this sounds sexual to me....