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She is mine

her beauty
like a revelation

    is mine …
    but not her being

stuns my senses
with lingering impressions

    she is mine …
    but not her being

radiating from love
with guided wisdom

    she is mine …
    but not her being

sensitively dosed
into this being of mine

    but not her being
    although I know she is mine …

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Author notes

I wrote this poem with my wife in mind. She often says to me: "I love you lots!" This humbles me to think that there is such a person of this earth, and that God willed her to be my wife.

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  • penman gold member
    March 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    Wonderful, wonderful ...

    tender, proud, endearing poetry. Simply beautiful. She belongs to you, yet: you set her free to be who she is.

    Ah, Frans. A happy marriage is the BEST gift one can share with one's children. She will love you forever LOTS -- I can tell!



    Myra


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Now what wife
    wouldn't want this said o her?
    Your choosen words are beautiful and tender, and she should love you lots...you're a wonderful person Fran.
    Slán
    Dolores xx


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 8, 2008

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    but not her being
    although I know she is mine …

    your selcted immages and chosen woreds are the wonderful effects of this poetry..well done....


  • stavykm gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    This is beautiful Write

    I so adored this write of your lovely wife in your heart and mind. I'm sure she loved this for you love her being but you don't own her being. The message is a very healthy one for all to read. She Is Mine is a perfect, loving title to this poem for your wife. For she is your in the context of becoming as one in marriage with love!! Excellent Poem. Thank you for sharing with me.
    Wishing you many blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • PureRomance
    February 7, 2008

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    This poem is absolutely beautiful and really sweet. You did an amazing job with this poem. God bless you always in each thing you do and write and best wishes to you in this contest. I hope you win.

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