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Di'wine'

When I sit with  a bottle of wine
I feel myself so divine
Waiting curiously for none
and taking the pints in lonely tone

Label or Brand doesn't matter
or for that reason makes any sense to me
Tee totallers please note
Drinking wine brings out only hard truths
normally not revealed in countering at  tables
Be fine in required healthy doses

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devine feelings

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  • alexandrathegreat
    February 15, 2008

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    I still don't know what kind of wine you'd be. But this has some good pointers for those who like to hit the bottle thank you for the entry.


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    February 7, 2008

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    interesting. I don't drink so I really cant relate to this. but its good that other people can I suppose.

    dani


    • Purush
      February 7, 2008
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      A surprise

      surprisingly i am a tee totaller throughout
      i take the nectar of poetry in daily doses
      sometimes beyond the limits