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never liked the rain

I never liked the rain,
It reminded me too much of my own tears,
I hear it falling in the night,
My tears joining in the shower,
till I walked through it with you and you smiled at me
And when I hear it I just cant believe I never liked the rain

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  • bones7
    February 7, 2008
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    Good job.
    Nice usage of the lyric.