I will not cry I will not cry
I will be strong and I will fight
not a tear will leave the eye
and I will not cry I will not cry
No matter how painful life becomes
and no more friends are worth the trust
no matter how much I am down
I will not cry I will not cry
If no one cared and no one asked
and things don't go the way I planned
if my pal turns to be a lie
I will not cry I will not cry
Though deep inside I'm screaming loud
and the candle there can no more light
though it's hard it's really hard
I will not cry I will not cry
I if was deceived if I was blamed
if pieces of hope actually died
not a tear will leave the eye
but I will fight and I will not cry
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a ninja, it's so nice to hear that, thank you much

and dani: i'm glad u liked it, and it'd be even better if you come back and read more

thank you
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I like how you use the line "I will not cry" over and over again. I like it. Keep up the good job. I think I will come back to read more of your poetry.
dani -
this is a very good poem and it makes people wonder about you you and i love the way you use the same line overy time it expresses only one emotion but also every emotion.

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hey!! thank you


pleased to hear that
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