I find myself able to dance,
I find that I can never fall.
I find myself able to love,
I find that I can never fail.
I find myself able to laugh,
I find that I can never cry.
I find myself happy with you,
I find that with you I am two.
Author notes
Prompt:
...the moments I am truly alive I spend in you...the moments I am truly aware I live with you...the moments I never want to end...are moments with you...Unknown
The last line is not a typo.
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Around 20 lines.
No Rules.
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It is only eight lines, so if you feel it should be DQed go ahead.
A contest entry
- the moments.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended February 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be up front and honest and tell me what you think.
Comments
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I find myself happy with you,
I find that with you I am two.
Your simplicity is the beauty of this beautiful work..thanks for your wonderful work..
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Thank you so much.
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