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Vow

Sobbing gasps
Surround a dangling rosary
In deaths cold grasp
One last thing, promise me
As prayers are stuttered
When I take my final breath
Choking on these words uttered
Follow me tonight into death
For one thing is for sure
Everything balances on the scale
So if I give my life
Then I shall take yours
Even if it means we burn in hell
I beg you now, don’t fear my knife
I can not bear for you to be gone
Gazing on your face tonight
Suffering from the fear of being alone
When I face judgment’s light
It is time for life and death to blend
You must make your decision now
You swore to me your love without end
It is time to make good on your vow

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by andywontdie, enjoy.

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  • CraziiSexiiCool
    February 11, 2008
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    Very nice flow..enjoyable read!


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    February 7, 2008

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    Love it. The almost simplicity of it. The rhyming is good and the flow is great. Very well done indeed!

    ♥Bandaid