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Pete's Peanut Butter

Eat Pete's Peanut Butter
It will make your heart flutter
Oohs, ahs of delight you'll mutter
If deprived swear words you'll utter
So for dinner, breakfast, lunch or brunch
Wether it be smooth or with a crunch
Do not skimp, consume a bunch.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Peanut butter is so yummy to enjoy!

    I had 3 brothers and a Dad who used to smother peanut
    butter on absolutely everything..sometimes I would just
    grimace at their choices!

    However, peanut butter is so tasty!
    good job poet!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen/Seattle.


  • galfalfa gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Gotta love that peanut butter..its so unpretentious and filling Spreadable peanuts in the form of butter

    thanks for this!

    galfalfa

  • Flamecaster
    February 7, 2008
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    Wonderful....it made me laugh..hope you win...love peanut butter...yum yum...!! good luck...


  • PureRomance
    February 7, 2008
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    This made me smile

    Thank you for making me smile and almost laugh. I've been really depressed lately so I needed the laugh. Thank you. Awesome job with this poem. It's fantastic. God bless you in everything you do and write and best of wishes to you and this poem in the contest. I hope you win.


  • LAPoe gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    I guess I better put my order in for a case ..
    my hubby will love it..he's a big peanut butter fan.
    laurie


    • galfalfa gold member
      February 7, 2008
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      LOL, maybe peanut butter is the reason why he needs gerbil wipes?


  • Dragon Tamer
    February 7, 2008

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    If deprived swear words you'll utter?
    Sounds like my kind of peanut butter
    Can't wait to see this on the shelves....I'm game to try some Thanks for sharing this humorous little ad with us and best of luck in the contest.
    DT

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