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Freedom

It is times like these when you just want to scream.
Wide eyes protect you from embarrassment
While a strong energy bolt flows through you.
You are free; you are extraordinarily happy and free.
Running through the grass with your clothes barely hanging on,
You catch a sign.
"No Diving."
All at once your heart is filled with joy.
Jumping into the water, doing cartwheels,
You are more free than you ever thought you could be,
And alas, you are at home.

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  • Celticjedi
    February 18, 2008

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    Wonderful job! You worked so well with the picture, and I love how you wrote it! Great job, keep this work up! Thank you for entering and good luck.
    ~Cj